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Naruto fanfic: either a self insert or an oc, both sound interesting to write. It would be pretty basic but hopefully good. I've read enough I should be able to make something good by now.- izuna28dCommented
Number of wings and you can make them like tattoos on his back to hide them
For example, by the number of wings) Or will they just be small wings at first but grow over time? - izuna2mthCommented
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2. Either the hero will feel pain, malaise and other emotions. - izuna2mthCommentedCh 2 Announcement
- izuna7mthCommentedCh 15 Should I Continue?
- izuna7mthCommentedCh 1 Restarting the fic
- izuna1yrPosted
- izuna1yrPosted
It’ has potential but it doesn’t read like a story more like and overview of what could’ve been a good story there are no firsthand interactions I.e. you say he picked up a dragon egg but never describe it it’s more like continual background information rather than a story and the story develops too fast and all relationships are just glossed over this is a good story idea but the execution leaves a lot to be desired
- izuna1yrCommented
Is the ox a he or a she
She examined her new appearance as she changed her clothes. Short neat brown hair, light brown eyes with almost imperceptible lines of light deep within, a body of golden proportions resulting from her balanced diet and accompanying her family on her morning exercises. If she had to point out a single flaw, it was that she was a bit shorter compared to the other kids her age. And though he could change that with his talent, he didn't. If she started making too many changes, maybe the day would come when she didn't remember what her original appearance was. - izuna1yrReplied to ferferfer2
- izuna1yrCommentedCh 8 Chapter 8
- izuna1yrCommentedCh 3 Ch 03 - Planning for the Future
- izuna1yrCommentedCh 3 ...........
- izuna1yrPosted
He started out as a good MC then he was dumbed down as soon as he went to school so he can fit into Harry’s little gang to tell the truth if I wanted to reread Harry Potter I would just do so there is really nothing new to this fanfic just HP plus one but hey the system seemed interesting in the beginning so read if yo don’ t good luck 👍 👍**********************££**********************************
- izuna1yrCommentedCh 4 Diagon Alley
- izuna1yrCommented
No OC slytherin Daphne or luna or no lov interest yet Yes for a unique wand Idc about the goblin dialogue Something interesting for a familiar I personally think dumbledoor is really the villain anyway so you should decide cause I am bias No hiding everything something he can keep to himself no need to over share
Ch 2 Quick Questions - izuna1yrPosted
This one looks promising I like the personality of the OC it’s a little lazy but hardworking when he feels the need the fact that he’s not all super slave a hoe make s it even better but don’t get me wrong it’s not like he is detached or disinterested either he just cares about his own shit first and if he has time he’ll help or if he feels like it picture a Nara Naruto with more Nara than Naruto
- izuna1yrReplied to SonJason16