Review Detail of GifflarGod in Xianxia: Tortoise Longevity Art
Review detail
Rereview: Story is a complete mess.. writing is so bad that it is hard to understand anything in the novel.. There are too many things that I'm unable to understand that the novel should be rewritten completely.. it is very bad novel
Xianxia: Tortoise Longevity Art
Aurora_Ryan
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yeah maybe specify those parts you don't understand so that the author can go back to those parts if he decides to edit his novel instead of just calling it trash, your review is just criticism and not a constructive one too.
GifflarGod:It's too complicated story with no explabations on many things and many mistanss that it is too hard to point out specific things about the story
It's too complicated story with no explabations on many things and many mistanss that it is too hard to point out specific things about the story
Hello_Hi_Goodbye:Broo it's not a review... it's just a rant. At least write something substantial.
Rudy_Kim:yeah maybe specify those parts you don't understand so that the author can go back to those parts if he decides to edit his novel instead of just calling it trash, your review is just criticism and not a constructive one too.
the novel is a mess.. the plot is interesting but the writing and explanation is a mess, very bad structure of sentences. It's hard to understand a sentence but somehow you make sense of it after reading the paragraph.. I don't know how to explain, it's the eighth wonder of the world.
Kido_TO:tbh i love the novel having read latest chapters, so I don't think your specification is correct..