Review Detail of DetachedDreamer in Great...I'm A Devil Swordman (DxD)

first volume was good. the second one feels like the author is in a rush to finish. details are nonexistent. The MC just uses short cuts to reach his destination instantly, whether that be brainwashing or teleporting. He might be an android because he doesn't feel or desire. doesnt care to talk, respond, or listen. but when he's looking at the stars thinking about his mom he cries and when he's playing with dead bodies he's not even dismayed by the scene, he feels "nothing.".... while its not bad overall, it just feels a bit lazy. I know the MC is in a rush but writing about it doesn't have to be as well. there could be actual character development in the future but his initial character is just so lowsy. He feels like a mix of a zombie, an emo, and bullied middle school kid fused and was given powers. but seriously it's not bad give it a chance firsr before taking my words to heart.