Review Detail of SILENT_NECR0N in Harry Potter: Legacy Keeper

Hello, I am an author in progress and I invite you to read my HP fanfaction called: "Harry Potter: Narnia and the World Hidden in a Closet." Your suggestions and comments would help me.

context of your fan fic

I am trying to write a story where I integrate the Chronicles of Narnia, Alex will be involved in and a story much different from that of the famous Harry Potter, from the beginning everything will be merged in such a way that it will be very little distinguishable both different stories together. I recommend it, well, it deserves to be read.