Review Detail of Brian_Hanes_117 in Legend of the END

This is a fun story, the world background is there, and the updates are consistent. The writing could be a bit more polished and a few things are oddly phrased due to translation but overall it is a fun story for someone interested in a more simplistic battle-based tale. The author has his own ranking system as well. Description is interesting at times though I would appreciate if the chapters were long and there was more content in them. One thing that especially could use is a bit more explanation about the setting, environment, and what it looks like. The world background is there when it comes to describing the circumstances but it doesn't make me feel like I'm in the world. I want to know what foods they eat, what their cultures are, what it is like going for a walk outside as the MC, etc. Remember you are not just telling a story but you are also making a world as if you are experiencing it. Everything that would happen in such a story like this should be laid out in the novel. Wishing you the best on your journey writer, cheers.