Decent story. Something off about the writing style. feels like some kind of high end translation app helped write it or something. it doesn't have a natural feel at all. Not a fan of killing off parents. its been done so often it creates zero emotional impact anymore and is just the easy way out to create drama or a catalyst for character growth. other than that it isn't bad for an AU. im a fan of OG Pikachu and his second pokemon. Give it a try and judge for yourself.
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