Review Detail of DetachedDreamer in The Revolution of Westeros

Deleted my first review because I spoiled the cringey end of the first arc. Cringey as in its the most used cliche emotional catalyst use for fanfics. A good story stained by lazy writing to create emotional impact for change and story development. it's been used so much most of us have become numb to it and find ourselves asking why can't these authors find another way. but then you realize its a fanfic author and being that creative isn't in their skillset or they just aren't that committed to being creative. Not suggesting this author is lacking ability because his writing other than the situations that emotionally scar him are great. but im over reading such cliche dribble. im pretty sure most can still guess what im talking about but out of respect for a decent writer I've removed the exact details. even tho honestly at this point, people should be warned of such details beforehand. Not like its some amazing plot point worth remembering. sad to see a story with potential lose it. Still, this is my opinion and you should still give the story a chance.