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Review Detail of WoahBuddy in Naruto: immortal Ninja

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WoahBuddy
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I only read three chapters. I didn't enjoy reading it. I think this story has potential for those who like to read a fast-paced story. But this isn't for me. I thought the overall story was ambiguous and average. The MC is commonplace in most narratives, such as personality and attitude-wise. We get the standard MC package of being an orphan, quiet, intelligent, big ambitions, etc. I thought the overall writing was somewhat decent. It has punctuation and capitalization issues, but the overall flow was good. The text feels robotic and stiff, with little to no emotion. It's highly monotonous: "Haru did this, then this, and then later on, did this." Overall, it's a 2.8/5 for me

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CruelReality
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Trash review after only three chapter…

NowGoWithTheFlow
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Trash comment. Kyle_Nixon gave a more legit review than most 5 star reviews shown.

CruelReality:Trash review after only three chapter…
David_Drake
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NowGoWithTheFlow:Trash comment. Kyle_Nixon gave a more legit review than most 5 star reviews shown.