The books grammar is ok. This is similar to another better book. Why 1 or 2 stars is simple it's because your focus on equality and women. At least the way you write about it. Now the way I wrote this sounds bad, but in that time frame, historical women and equality was bad for a reason which brought me out of the book an made reading this fustraiting to do. Also you make the MC feel like a wimp while making Unrealistic decisions no one would make. There isn't much character development or any story development that took my interest to read. To sum it up don't read this if you don't want to see left vs right politics view while reading.
Trash don't read. Chinese is the best is all this novel tells you. MC no brain dumb. East blue is East China sea in this novel. Same with others.
A great start of a novel. I just love novels about changing history with the foreknowledge. A great read to pass the time. Only 8 chapters out so far though. An I actually learned something, hitler was a vegetarian at some point in time. Keep going author don't stop writing this.
I gave up on this filler book. Because that's what it is. Why that type of devil fruit? simple plot armor. Should have just eat the first one.
chapter 85 ruins the entire novel for me. it just doesn't make any sense at all of the mc decision. A dumb mc after chapter 85 just to create plot an fillers.
Bad translation an I mean really bad. At least in some other Chinese novel they keep character names the same but in this novel none of the names or titles are correct. Not even the moves or devil fruits itself. Worse than mtl. Though I like the concept of this novel.
This is one of the greatest novels I have read so far on WN. Though author if you can increase the updates for the chapters I really like this novel. Well besides that the plot is very interesting an the MC is smart an very likeable. I also like the world building.
Don't read this. MC is just bad. Plot is really bad. Plus I have read so many novel starting as a baby that I just can't read these anymore.
The MC make dumb choices, basically MC is stupid. Also MC sounds like a child in every way. Why doesn't the system explain each of the ten kido, an even if that's ok then MC should have experimented each one in detail. This is only getting two stars because you can read this an bleach is one of my favorites.
I REALLY CAN'T READ THIS. What I mean by that, the grammar is ok great even it's just the plot or storyline I can't find myself to push through reading. So a wast of time reading this.
I wanted to give you a 1 star but I didn't just because I could actually read it. Though nothing makes sense. Author you should read it yourself after each chapter it will help you alot. Don't give up.
More please great concept for a interesting novel that will pass time for me. Hopefully this isn't dropped. Also make the chapters a little longer if possible.
A really great book to read. Though chapter 79 ruined it for me. I will most likely stop reading this after chapter 79 because MC just told his entire life story to the heroes after first confront when MC did nothing wrong. MC was ok an intelligent intill chapter 79 why make MC dumb?
Great concept though. Good grammar with an interesting power. Why mc get poster wanted dead alive? For plot also why not make shadow slaves? I am probably going to drop this novel. MC ok ish while the chapter are a little to short for me. Author you shouldn't change the pov to much I could tell you are kinda struggling with that. Though that's up to you just do you since it's your book.
This novel started great, with the MC smart, an a loner who only cares for himself. Though that has change chapter 65 to 68 is when the Author became lazy an then make the MC dumb. Chapter 68 is where I have drop the book. Hopefully the author does an edit. unlikely though.
Why are you avoiding the clan meeting for MC to be clan head? It feels like author is trying to extend this as much as possible to get as many chapters in before MC becomes clan head. I like this novel an has a great idea. Just..... well I want more chapters is all. The progress is kinda slow.
A great idea of a novel. I love it though I am frustrated over the fact why you didn't create a character with sealing skills, Uzumaki skills, magic biding contract, knowledge transfer. An also just summon the first hokage an second or even the fourth it would be funny to see them revived. Also bring another option is either a technology summon or a zerg summon. I am waiting for more updates.
Nothing really happens. MC just wants to run away an also a beta. MC always gets tied up or beat up. No sex scenes at all. I don't recommend this at all.
I have read this new rewrite an all I can say is it's a downgrade. The MC feels like a mad child about the world. I am only leaving this novel 5 stars because of original book an not because of this rewrite. I will try an stay intill chapter 15 an see if this improves. If not we'll I will just forget this novel ever made.