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Review Detail of Max_Dreamscape in Naruto: immortal Ninja

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Max_Dreamscape
Max_DreamscapeLv131yrMax_Dreamscape

Beautiful. The MC is not needlessly OP neither too weak. He is humane but also smart. Despite reading up to only 15 chapters, the world building is nice and realistic.

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Naruto: immortal Ninja

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Godking2000
Godking2000Lv4Godking2000

You said too weak does that mean he is weak just not too weak

KasiCair
KasiCairLv1KasiCair

Honestly, you won't even notice if he is strong or weak as you read it. Not with all the simping for Nawaki there is in the story. Now, to be completely fair to the author, the story might be not my cup of tea as I find the development mind-numbingly boring, but it is well-written and quite okay. The focus on Nawaki is justified as the boy was MC's gateway to tutelage under Mito and whatnot. I just don't like how much focus there is on Nawaki and MC's bromance. It made the story boorishly dull for me. But what do I know? You just might enjoy it. Don't worry about how strong the MC is right now. His ability is quite OP as far as potential goes so click on that read button and give it a go without asking useless questions. See for yourself.

Godking2000:You said too weak does that mean he is weak just not too weak
Giga_Weeb
Giga_WeebLv2Giga_Weeb

Of course the worldbuilding is good. Fanfiction is having the source material do it for you.

Nerdio
NerdioLv2Nerdio

Not at all man, to make a really good fanfic you expand on the plot and create your own😉

Giga_Weeb:Of course the worldbuilding is good. Fanfiction is having the source material do it for you.