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The translation is great, character design is good, backgrounds and update stability is average, but when it comes to quality and development is poor. The story takes from 5- 10 chapters basically to turn page. Each chapter has to much repeated description as the writer is using different words but with the same meaning leading the story to be boring. The storyline has potential but repeated description has to be fixed.

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Pregnant with My Sister's Billionaire Fiance

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Thank you for taking the time to share your feedback and thoughts on our work. I take your feedback seriously and will strive to address these issues and enhance the storytelling experience. Thanks again.