this Jones is nothing but a fricken stalker is sooo irritating also a psycho. Eliana needs to live immediately and not even tell her parents.

Something is definitely fishy here. Let's not forget that Catherine was into Jones first, also the first person she was in contact with was Jones, now just because someone looks alike another person it doesn't make them blood related (Catherine and Ariel or Damon and Leo) Catherine is a doctor and so is Jones soooo.. let's do the math here.

The story is like a body with no head, arms, and legs. Can't get to wrap up this sickening beginning of it. There should be a sharp description of it for us readers to understand. The only description of the characters is age, names, CEO billionaire,. Definitely more details are needed to get bits and pieces of the story, like Is Mr. Mu this despicable evil man because of revenge? deception? or what ?!

"AUTHOR PLEASE I WITH THE MOST OF RESPECT KINDLY ASK OF YOU TO RE-REVISE EACH CHAPTER BEFORE SUBMITTING". The storyline is good and you're definitely trying your best but the constant errors in names It's kinda of degrading a bit all of your great efforts 😔. Because of this please 🥺 take my comment in mind.

Grounded, phone taken away , not allowed to go out, . How old is she again . I do understand her parent point of view not wanting their daughter to suffer any second longer but seems like on their desperate attempt they're also making a mistake by throwing her to her ex's best friend.

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The translation is great, character design is good, backgrounds and update stability is average, but when it comes to quality and development is poor. The story takes from 5- 10 chapters basically to turn page. Each chapter has to much repeated description as the writer is using different words but with the same meaning leading the story to be boring. The storyline has potential but repeated description has to be fixed.

Hahaha matt's "2 inch pinky promise" 😂🤣

This book is for sure unlike any other story. The best is that the plot is not on a loop. I read other books 📚 from different authors but for sure they all lack of creativity and I observe that those authors are following this marvelous Kenzz, most probably trying to imitate her writing and creativity but they don't even hold up a candle. I'm pretty sure that there are other talented authors but so far Kenzz is one of the best. Thank you for this incredible book.

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Disappointed!. At first storyline was consistent, but as time passed it kept on going back and forth as if the author was begging to brainstorm. Let's not forget about the constant "I WILL REPLACE THIS CHAPTER SOON ". The story now is just being dragged out. It truly seems the author just became uninterested in this story and so started a release of a new book. Just my thoughts, but if you just can't keep up with 1 or 2 books at a time what makes you think you can with 3. I followed the author's work thinking that because she had such a great book develop on " The hidden wife " it was going to be the same on the rest but look at me now 🤦🤦🤦

mmm 🤔 is it possible that Elle is Betty and that on the heart ❤️ transplant that Zeke performed he actually transplanted Alyssa's heart on Betty, now ( Elle ).

mmm 🤔 is it possible that Elle is Betty and that on the heart ❤️ transplant that Zeke performed he actually transplanted Alyssa's heart on Betty, now ( Elle ).