Review Detail of Medic_o_Loki in COUGAR SYSTEM ONLINE

Another great story by GEEGEE, with a lot of strong, intelligent, clever, creative, and talented characters. Older women with younger men is a topic that people either love or hate — almost no one is wishy washy when discussing it. I really like the promotion of tolerance and respect in this novel, as we can all use more of both. The characters are very interesting and fleshed out, feeling very authentic with good and bad quirks. Only the system is omnipotent, with the characters having to learn certain things through hard work and dedication. Once again, this story’s adherence to its own rules is very good, something that the author obviously works very hard on. Inconsistency in world building is a deal-breaker for me as a reader, so I’m always happy to find authors that take the time to prepare rules and follow them. Unfortunately there are a few proofreading/formatting issues that break the reading experience, especially the repeating of paragraphs. Hopefully someone will see this review and pass the information along to the powers that be and the story gets looked into with the intention of correction. In summary, this is my opinion on this novel: