Medic_o_Loki
Medic in Loki’s army, reading until the Master calls on me for one of my many talents.
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I miss him so much. Excelsior!!
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The Pacific Ocean is very big.
I have got to hear the story of how that person acquired that particular skill!
They’ve said throughout that Corey is a woman. Go back and check the pronouns. Plus, I can’t see Maxine following a man who isn’t the Dark Lord.
Hmmm…. Like a certain meat shield Mechanic we all know and love……
You have no idea.
Another great story by GEEGEE, with a lot of strong, intelligent, clever, creative, and talented characters. Older women with younger men is a topic that people either love or hate — almost no one is wishy washy when discussing it. I really like the promotion of tolerance and respect in this novel, as we can all use more of both. The characters are very interesting and fleshed out, feeling very authentic with good and bad quirks. Only the system is omnipotent, with the characters having to learn certain things through hard work and dedication. Once again, this story’s adherence to its own rules is very good, something that the author obviously works very hard on. Inconsistency in world building is a deal-breaker for me as a reader, so I’m always happy to find authors that take the time to prepare rules and follow them. Unfortunately there are a few proofreading/formatting issues that break the reading experience, especially the repeating of paragraphs. Hopefully someone will see this review and pass the information along to the powers that be and the story gets looked into with the intention of correction. In summary, this is my opinion on this novel:
About 5’6” and 130 pounds
This is a different kind of transmigration with a system story. The main character doesn’t get the system immediately! The story arc is very logical and maintains the reader’s attention quite well. The world building is not only detailed and well described but it stays consistent to its rules, which decreases breaks in the reading experience. There are a few translation errors, but the author’s story is extremely well written. All in all, here’s my final thought:
I aim to please.