Review Detail of Pilotfranco in I Am The Game's Villain

Look I’ve been enjoying the novel frankly the mc sucks so much and Jayden is such an anointing character too. Let’s start with the mc the backstory is so confusing for no reason other than to add ”plot” but the plot isn’t interesting it’s just extra and tedious. Then the mc spent so long wingmaning Jayden like wtf, get his cock out your mouth. it was bearable since Jayden was innocent but now he’s some horney fuck going after every women. The plot is getting more extra and it’s becoming lame, and the character of both mc and Jayden bring this novel down.