Review Detail of Spelloyal in Multiversal Library

The story starts interesting and unlike other readers I don't see a problem with the author not being good at writing romance, most fanfic writers are amateurs and you can't expect them not to master the art of writing. The Romance wasn't very good, but I didn't think it was bad either, it would have been better if it wasn't with an OC since it's fanfic but it didn't spoil the story. What really detracted from the read is how except the MC, his girlfriend and Hestia to a minuscule degree, no other characters have presence or personality, they are completely forgettable extras that you won't miss even if they disappear from the story. This unfortunately ends up harming the fanfic a lot since it becomes superficial with a world where it seems that only the MC exists. This problem becomes even more apparent when we see in some conversations that the MC narrates the speech of the other characters instead of the story showing these characters saying something.