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Spelloyal

Spelloyal

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  • Spelloyal
    Spelloyal1d
    Replied to Herohero

    You are partially correct. I still think you could have removed the racism and not detailed the sex scene without changing the plot or hurting the fic. I also believe that this arrogance was too extreme, no one likes annoying young masters who get offended by anything and immediately go for extreme punishments and you basically wrote an MC who acts like that. From a logical point of view and looking exclusively at the plot, your character being like this makes a certain amount of sense, but from a reader's or author's point of view, it doesn't make sense to write a main character using personality traits that are seen as unpleasant by the vast majority of readers. You could write an arrogant MC who dismisses inferiors without making him a young xianxia master. Despite this, I agree that giving two stars for these reasons wasn't very fair, I ended up lowering the rating too much because I felt very disappointed with the MC suddenly acting like a stupid xianxia asshole when I was enjoying the fic. I'll continue reading the fic a little more and write a fairer review around chapter 30 or 35.

    The Owl house : A witch ?? no no ,I am a Magus
    Anime & Comics · Herohero
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  • Spelloyal
    Spelloyal3d
    Replied to Phelio_n_Craze

    Why was Bleach DXD deleted? I understand dropping it, but why you deleted the fic?

    Ch 11 The vote is out
    [Marvel x Dc] My Grandpa Is The-One-Above-All
    Anime & Comics · Phelio_n_Craze
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  • Spelloyal
    Spelloyal3d
    Posted

    To be honest, the idea was great, a fic full of potential, but completely wasted. The first chapter appears to have been was intentionally written in the most offensive way possible to upset as many readers as possible. An NTR sex scene right off the bat and a racist MC is really fucked up. After chapter 1 the story more or less stabilized with a very interesting concept and an MC who is not a good person but has good intentions, something like a less intelligent but a little less evil version of Leylin from WMW, but in chapter 19 he simply became a complete psychopath for no reason, he even started acting in the young master xianxia style by attacking and planning to kill and torture people for insulting him or making his back touch the ground. Seriously, if we ignore chapters 1, 19 and 20 this would even be a good fic to kill time, but these three chapters really screwed up the story in a way rarely seen.

    The Owl house : A witch ?? no no ,I am a Magus
    Anime & Comics · Herohero
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  • Spelloyal
    Spelloyal3d
    Replied to Herohero

    For some reason I can't post my review, it doesn't seem like the author is deleting it since it doesn't even appear when i post, so I'll just post it here. To be honest, the idea was great, a fic full of potential, but completely wasted. The first chapter appears to have been intentionally written in the most offensive way possible to upset as many readers as possible. An NTR sex scene right off the bat and a racist MC is really fucked up. After chapter 1 the story more or less stabilized with a very interesting concept and an MC who is not a good person but has good intentions, something like a less intelligent but a little less evil version of Leylin from WMW, but in chapter 19 he simply became a complete psychopath for no reason, he even started acting in the young master xianxia style by attacking and planning to kill and torture people for insulting him or making his back touch the ground. Seriously, if we ignored chapters 1, 19 and 20 this would even be a good fic to kill time, but these three chapters really screwed up the story in a way rarely seen.

    The Owl house : A witch ?? no no ,I am a Magus
    Anime & Comics · Herohero
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  • Spelloyal
    Spelloyal3d
    Replied to Ziad_Jaffer

    I've been slowing down lately, but I still check it every now and then. To be honest, at first it was pure spite because I hate these authors who artificially increase their rating and it's been a while since I've seen someone do that so blatantly. Over time I kind of started to find it fun. I just checked and that one disappeared too, so I'm posting 19

    Player's Journey In Anime World
    Anime & Comics · AbsoluteCode
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  • Spelloyal
    Spelloyal3d
    Posted

    (19): Number of times this review was deleted by the author. To find out if your review has been deleted, log out of your account and look at the page as deleted reviews still appear for the review author. After confirming that your review has been deleted, delete it from your account and post again. I originally intended to give it 3 stars, but the author is one of those idiots who thinks keeping the fic at 5 stars is a good thing so I dropped it to 1 star. Honestly, most readers avoid these fics full of 5-star reviews that are just spam without any decent reviews. There is no 5-star fic as it is impossible to please everyone, so it is obvious that the rating for this fic is artificial. Despite this, I will still keep what I wrote in the review that was deleted below. When this is deleted I will repost it with the new count of the number of times it was deleted. It's a translated fic, probably Chinese, and that comes with certain problems that most of them have. The story lacks any conformity with the canon in the details, the author seems to be too lazy to search the wiki for basic information and takes a lot of things from beyond. It also has the classic problems of Chinese fics in terms of dialogue and character personality, but on the other hand it is a good translation for a fanfic. In short, it's an OK read as long as you're able to turn off your brain and ignore the errors in details and stupid characters.

    Player's Journey In Anime World
    Anime & Comics · AbsoluteCode
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  • Spelloyal
    Spelloyal3d
    Commented

    This is crazy! Not even the best authors earn that much. Of course, good authors are rare, but at the end of the day, all the costs and risks are in the hands of the publisher.

    "The best stories have an end, Mr. Piniet, and my limit is 50%. If you don't accept, I'll go elsewhere," I said firmly.
    The Owl house : A witch ?? no no ,I am a Magus
    Anime & Comics · Herohero
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  • Spelloyal
    Spelloyal3d
    Replied to Vastoking

    Since he is this could very well be the result of self modifications since he is trying to become a Magus.

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    The Owl house : A witch ?? no no ,I am a Magus
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  • Spelloyal
    Spelloyal3d
    Replied to Herohero

    cool

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    The Owl house : A witch ?? no no ,I am a Magus
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  • Spelloyal
    Spelloyal3d
    Replied to Abel_Y

    ??????????

    She seemed clearly annoyed by my behavior, I could understand her.
    The Owl house : A witch ?? no no ,I am a Magus
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  • Spelloyal
    Spelloyal10d
    Replied to Markushnia

    It's truly a bore, one of the biggest I've ever seen and greatly worsened by the phenomenal level of stupidity in everything that happened during the attack. Coruscant having literally no type of planetary defense and leaving the senate completely vulnerable to a random terrorist attack, the Jedi masters and knights in the temple ignoring the fight and leaving everything to the MC, Yoda and the guards, the Jedi guards being weaklings dying to Chitauri, Thanos sending a single ship to the capital of the Republic expecting them to invade and leave successfully, them in fact successfully invading the capital of the Galactic Republic without being detected. The level of stupidity is unprecedented.

    However, wisdom—or perhaps a strategic caution—prevails. "Attacking the heart of the Republic directly would be premature," Thanos muses aloud. "Though they lack a standing army, the Republic still controls the majority of the Galaxy, which would no doubt unite against us should we reveal our hand too soon."
    I’m Star-Lord (SW Xover)
    Movies · AlienWarlord
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  • Spelloyal
    Spelloyal10d
    Posted

    I like this author's fics, but I couldn't avoid giving this one a low rating. The idea is good, the beginning is very interesting but we are eventually hit with a series of stupid events that are impossible to swallow. Some of these events are: Thanos sending a ship with troops, Gamora and two of his main subordinates to invade Coruscant and recapture Nebula. It's easier to point out which part of this isn't stupid than what is, because it was all stupid. Thanos was never stupid, how the hell would he send a single ship to invade the republic's capital and expect them to succeed and escape the republic's territory???? To make matters worse, the damn republic doesn't have any kind of defense or army. Literally, they have no defense as a single ship actually managed to invade the planet and attack the Jedi temple. Seriously, if they were that vulnerable the Sith would have simply bombed the Senate and separated the Republic. Or any terrorist could have done the same. The Jedi are also pathetically weak, with some temple guards dying to chitauri cannon fodder and the masters and Jedi inside the temple ignoring the fight and leaving everything to Yoda, the MC and the Guards.

    I’m Star-Lord (SW Xover)
    Movies · AlienWarlord
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  • Spelloyal
    Spelloyal11d
    Commented

    ???????????? Since when are jedals this weak??? Where is the good old Jedi equivalent to 100 droids, capable of dodging and returning fire??? It's sad to see these Jedai weaker than padawan

    With a resigned, frustrated sigh, Dooku reached out and called upon one of the deceased Jedi guards lightsabers, its blade igniting as soon as it fell into his hand, cutting sharply through anyone who stood in his way.
    I’m Star-Lord (SW Xover)
    Movies · AlienWarlord
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  • Spelloyal
    Spelloyal11d
    Commented

    It's been a while since I read something stupid like this. How the hell does a single ship manage to invade the capital of the republic? If it were that easy, the Sith would simply bomb a senate meeting and that would tear the republic apart. Besides, Thanos isn't stupid, how does he expect the mission to be successful like that? Even if they enter the planet, it will be impossible for a single ship to leave with Coruscant's defensive fleet, much less escape Republic territory.

    Ch 35 C35 Attack on the Jedi Temple!
    I’m Star-Lord (SW Xover)
    Movies · AlienWarlord
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  • Spelloyal
    Spelloyal11d
    Replied to Morg535

    In my understanding, the republic does not have a permanent army but all the planets have their own troops. I believe it's something like Game Of Thrones where the republic calls in troops from all planets if necessary.

    "True, it's unlikely, but it's always possible… The Republic could decide to build an army at any time, after all."
    I’m Star-Lord (SW Xover)
    Movies · AlienWarlord
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  • Spelloyal
    Spelloyal11d
    Replied to JasonReilly05
    [Insert picture of Gamora here]
    I’m Star-Lord (SW Xover)
    Movies · AlienWarlord
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  • Spelloyal
    Spelloyal11d
    Replied to Helia_King

    The problem here is that eating spoiled food is basically eating poison. It's not really nutritious and will do more harm than good

    Despite the revulsion, survival instincts prevailed. With a determined sigh, he crawled over and picked up the disgusting food, visibly recoiling as he brought it to his face. Taking a deep breath, Peter took a reluctant bite, the slimy and bitter taste assaulting his senses.
    I’m Star-Lord (SW Xover)
    Movies · AlienWarlord
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  • Spelloyal
    Spelloyal13d
    Posted

    (18): Number of times this review was deleted by the author. To find out if your review has been deleted, log out of your account and look at the page as deleted reviews still appear for the review author. After confirming that your review has been deleted, delete it from your account and post again. I originally intended to give it 3 stars, but the author is one of those idiots who thinks keeping the fic at 5 stars is a good thing so I dropped it to 1 star. Honestly, most readers avoid these fics full of 5-star reviews that are just spam without any decent reviews. There is no 5-star fic as it is impossible to please everyone, so it is obvious that the rating for this fic is artificial. Despite this, I will still keep what I wrote in the review that was deleted below. When this is deleted I will repost it with the new count of the number of times it was deleted. It's a translated fic, probably Chinese, and that comes with certain problems that most of them have. The story lacks any conformity with the canon in the details, the author seems to be too lazy to search the wiki for basic information and takes a lot of things from beyond. It also has the classic problems of Chinese fics in terms of dialogue and character personality, but on the other hand it is a good translation for a fanfic. In short, it's an OK read as long as you're able to turn off your brain and ignore the errors in details and stupid characters.

    Player's Journey In Anime World
    Anime & Comics · AbsoluteCode
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  • Spelloyal
    Spelloyal14d
    Posted

    (17): Number of times this review was deleted by the author. To find out if your review has been deleted, log out of your account and look at the page as deleted reviews still appear for the review author. After confirming that your review has been deleted, delete it from your account and post again. I originally intended to give it 3 stars, but the author is one of those idiots who thinks keeping the fic at 5 stars is a good thing so I dropped it to 1 star. Honestly, most readers avoid these fics full of 5-star reviews that are just spam without any decent reviews. There is no 5-star fic as it is impossible to please everyone, so it is obvious that the rating for this fic is artificial. Despite this, I will still keep what I wrote in the review that was deleted below. When this is deleted I will repost it with the new count of the number of times it was deleted. It's a translated fic, probably Chinese, and that comes with certain problems that most of them have. The story lacks any conformity with the canon in the details, the author seems to be too lazy to search the wiki for basic information and takes a lot of things from beyond. It also has the classic problems of Chinese fics in terms of dialogue and character personality, but on the other hand it is a good translation for a fanfic. In short, it's an OK read as long as you're able to turn off your brain and ignore the errors in details and stupid characters.

    Player's Journey In Anime World
    Anime & Comics · AbsoluteCode
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  • Spelloyal
    Spelloyal15d
    Commented

    I don't remember that part of the emotions, from what I know her power doesn't actually affect internal parts of her body and that's why she still needs to breathe.

    From another angle though… she was as if frozen in time. Perpetually stuck as the 18-year-old version of herself that first drank that fateful Cauldron vial of powers. Her personal perspective could change but she quite literally couldn't grow. Not mentally or physically. She couldn't age. Her emotions were stuck in a state of forced perpetuity, only dimly simulated by an alien Shard. Intimacy was impossible for her. With her power and 'stuck' personality, it was no surprise that Alexandria was cold and distant, ruthless and pragmatic.
    A Gacha-Grimoire System's Fae Gamble
    Book&Literature · Daddy
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