Review Detail of Rinne_Aurora in Tale of corruption

It's a genuinely good story with a whole lot of potential to be built. It was a very comfortable read and I enjoyed the easygoing pacing it had and the meticulous time it takes with its characters. I like the dynamic relationships they have and I would love to see more interactions in the future. I do wish the plot was more descriptive and emotionally engaging. I want to connect and be one with the world, but all of my senses are not engaging. I'd like that to be made better. Other than that, I am really looking forward to the new chapters! I'd love to see the world you have imagined in your head and I'd love to engage with your characters! I really like the sergeant and the librarian a whole lot, let us hope they develop into something positive xD Overall, keep up the good work !