Rinne_Aurora
yo, bro- who got you smiling like that? discord- rinne_aurora#1258
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It's a genuinely good story with a whole lot of potential to be built. It was a very comfortable read and I enjoyed the easygoing pacing it had and the meticulous time it takes with its characters. I like the dynamic relationships they have and I would love to see more interactions in the future. I do wish the plot was more descriptive and emotionally engaging. I want to connect and be one with the world, but all of my senses are not engaging. I'd like that to be made better. Other than that, I am really looking forward to the new chapters! I'd love to see the world you have imagined in your head and I'd love to engage with your characters! I really like the sergeant and the librarian a whole lot, let us hope they develop into something positive xD Overall, keep up the good work !
- Rinne_Aurora1yrCommentedCh 7 Blue Flames
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idk why i read, "reserved for peanuts." 😭
He soon reached a graveyard that was reserved for the peasants. - Rinne_Aurora1yrCommented
i like how he is maintaining transparency with her
"A'saal offered her help. She contacted an old friend of hers. Her associate will arrive at Babilim after a month or two if all goes well," Ahmad said. - Rinne_Aurora1yrCommented
make them a ship lol my toxic is showing smH
"Fucking bitch," Nawar muttered as he rubbed his neck. - Rinne_Aurora1yrCommented
nawar got no peace lol
A'saal gripped Nawar's neck with her right hand firmly and said, "Do not test my tolerance, Nawar." She gently swiped her left index and middle finger on Nawar's scar and said, "We both know what happened the last time you did that." - Rinne_Aurora1yrCommented
please that is so funny in one too many ways
The guard fell to the ground and screamed in pain and agony as the newly given hole in his forearm started sprinkling blood heavily. - Rinne_Aurora1yrCommented
Lil girlie went feral
She growled like a wild animal, forcefully broke free of the guard's hold, and landed on the ground. - Rinne_Aurora1yrCommented
yeah the king is so chill oml
The man smiled and said, "My name is Kurigalzu. The protector, servant and King of Mesopotamia." - Rinne_Aurora1yrCommented
no body wants kids' consent in this book lol
I sat on my bed, sighed, and thought. I finally had the opportunity to give Radhi a second chance in life at a grave cost, but that is a cost I am willing to bear. - Rinne_Aurora1yrCommented
yeah fr it was almost dms with a verified person kwkshxiwejdb
At the time, I was surprised. I never thought the king himself would reply this quickly. - Rinne_Aurora1yrCommented
it'd be hilarious if he vomitted over her bahahahaha
I felt a burning sensation in my thigh, and the sharp pain made me believe my thigh muscle was being torn apart. I was nauseous and almost vomited. - Rinne_Aurora1yrCommented
dog earing pages, my beloved the internet would hate you for that
Taz bent the top corner of the page she was on, placed the book next to her pillow, and slept shortly afterward. - Rinne_Aurora1yrCommented
damn she was deep in the friendship feels
Alone, loathed, and heartbroken. That is all that Taz had thought about ever since she woke up.