Pretty bad OC and Force interactions, and imagine shipping Lorelei and Shirou Emiya being Lorelei his sister? Simply disgusting as it's obvious it'll be quite force and I won't even bother seeing it through.
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LIKEI mean i get that their relationship seems force i admit it but i think that the author can make it more better and didnt skip the development of the relationship of lorelei and shirou But nah the author just skip their development of relationship.. But the fanfic is still good if yoy ignote the lorelei x shirou stuff if you really hate it though
FandomExplorer_2nd:.. I mean i dont really read or watch Fate/series so i dont know why you hate this "FANFIC" just because it has Lorelie x Shirou in it..
oh well.. i guess people have many different perspective on a story some might like it and some will not like it .w. welp..
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FandomExplorer_2nd:oh well.. i guess people have many different perspective on a story some might like it and some will not like it .w. welp..
Ohh.. so thats why some people dont like shiro x lorelie.. thanks for telling me mate i dont really watch fate series.. But you know.. It is a fanfic so.. theres goona be some changes base on the author want to write.. (If im goona be honest here i dont really know fate anime until i read this fanfic so i thought lorelie x shiro is a good pair even though i havent watch fate anime yet .w.)
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FandomExplorer_2nd:Ohh.. so thats why some people dont like shiro x lorelie.. thanks for telling me mate i dont really watch fate series.. But you know.. It is a fanfic so.. theres goona be some changes base on the author want to write.. (If im goona be honest here i dont really know fate anime until i read this fanfic so i thought lorelie x shiro is a good pair even though i havent watch fate anime yet .w.)
I think đ¤ from what I gather around I think it was because Lorelei was a powerful character and shirou is kind of not.. (It was because they think it was forced which is true because the author can make the relationship between Lorelei and shirou wrote better.. but sadly the author kinda rushed it :( so uhh it's understandable if some of the fate reader/watcher hate the ship )
Vince_Gregorie:Can you tell me why they are hated together? .
I was gonna read this but I accidentally saw a comment from the koironu arc and now I'm hesitating đ˘. Well Thank you so much for the quick reply!
FandomExplorer_2nd:I think đ¤ from what I gather around I think it was because Lorelei was a powerful character and shirou is kind of not.. (It was because they think it was forced which is true because the author can make the relationship between Lorelei and shirou wrote better.. but sadly the author kinda rushed it :( so uhh it's understandable if some of the fate reader/watcher hate the ship )
well actually you can skip the kuroinu arc and go directly to oshi no KO arc you won't miss a single important thing (Except for kuroinu arc which I think you already know the plot of.. but you can still read it and read how the MC help celestine destroy Smegs Empire)
Vince_Gregorie:I was gonna read this but I accidentally saw a comment from the koironu arc and now I'm hesitating đ˘. Well Thank you so much for the quick reply!
Lorelie is Extremely Racist towards non Noble people and Shirou is just a first Gen mage so it is quite literally impossible for her to Love him which people who like the Fate series hate as the charachters became too OC
FandomExplorer_2nd:well actually you can skip the kuroinu arc and go directly to oshi no KO arc you won't miss a single important thing (Except for kuroinu arc which I think you already know the plot of.. but you can still read it and read how the MC help celestine destroy Smegs Empire)
Yeah i know that thats why i said on one of my comments that some people who havent watch or read the fate series YET will like it (Depends on the readers)
Vidhan_Bhardwaj:Lorelie is Extremely Racist towards non Noble people and Shirou is just a first Gen mage so it is quite literally impossible for her to Love him which people who like the Fate series hate as the charachters became too OC
well fate fans are Fanatic even those that only watch some bits on and off usually don't like too much oc
FandomExplorer_2nd:Yeah i know that thats why i said on one of my comments that some people who havent watch or read the fate series YET will like it (Depends on the readers)
I tried to watch it again because I recently liked one or another Fate fanfic. But God. This is incredible. It is so tedious and boring to read that even if I tried hard I couldn't get far. A Chinese novel takes me less to put down. I have literally reached 1000 chapters in it.
BS2L2024:Honestly this story isn't for everybody, I got bored real quick with things going all over the place. I don't even know if the Author knows where they want this fic to go. But that's taste, I suppose..