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I've read till the latest chapter (52), and I have to admit, this is an excellent fanfic. It doesn't come without some errors though: 1. At chapter 30-something, chat gpt is used more often moving forward. Honestly, I have no idea why authors do this, it makes the book feel robotic, impersonal and unnecessarily complicated in regards to grammar and explanations. All this does is spoil your work. 2. This is more me giving my advice to a recent problem that I'm sure most readers agree with me on: Alex alternating gender. There were several ways he could have explained his survival but the author chose one of the worst ways ever. While the book is good enough to keep us reading, continued use of this will reduce your readers. Please change it. 3. The MC doesn't have much in personal power at the moment, but his death should make him focus more on that. Other than that, it's a good book.
Marvel: The Foundation
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Yeah That chapter made me hate this lol. All that building up to a d.mb take is incredibly sh.tty because all that Centuries worth that Ricci family made will be destroyed because of the head being dead, I don't think author knows just how a massive effect it will have. He can't just suddenly pop up and say "actually I am Ricci's sister that will take over the family" he doesn't realize that no one will care about her, they'll immediately want a piece of that pie that is the Ricci Family. Sure MC could mitigate some damage but even that will require lots and lots of effort and Money, something he have but it can't be used much since he needs it for the foundation. And all of that just for a Nerfed Natasha Romanoff. So yeah I come to hate this even though I extremely liked this. Do tell me if it becomes worth pursuing it.
The main problem is that the author doesn't even read the comments on his novel to see the reader's opinion which is very annoying
DespairHope:Yeah That chapter made me hate this lol. All that building up to a d.mb take is incredibly sh.tty because all that Centuries worth that Ricci family made will be destroyed because of the head being dead, I don't think author knows just how a massive effect it will have. He can't just suddenly pop up and say "actually I am Ricci's sister that will take over the family" he doesn't realize that no one will care about her, they'll immediately want a piece of that pie that is the Ricci Family. Sure MC could mitigate some damage but even that will require lots and lots of effort and Money, something he have but it can't be used much since he needs it for the foundation. And all of that just for a Nerfed Natasha Romanoff. So yeah I come to hate this even though I extremely liked this. Do tell me if it becomes worth pursuing it.