Wanted to review after reading the free chapters. The story is alright, and the potential for development of both the world and characters is good. I’m curious though, why does the system stop appearing after a while, it would be good to show the status every once in a while, its a bit difficult to keep up with the info otherwise, it is also a good way to let the readers track the progress of the character.
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