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BookDragonling
BookDragonlingLv41yrBookDragonling

The writing quality is pretty good. The story itself is somewhat believable. So uncle Ben gets cancer and loses his job. Does the MC decide to graduate high school early and use his insane intelligence to create something to make money on? No. A reincarnated military man decides to try out for the basketball team... I read the first paragraph of that chapter and couldn't go any further.

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Badass Peter Parker

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UdayWrites
UdayWritesAuthorUdayWrites

Fair enough!

UdayWrites
UdayWritesAuthorUdayWrites

But i'll defend some of my decisions #SPOILERS There are some light š¬š©šØš¢š„šžš«š¬ down. . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 1st I've stated how profitable basketball is! Even high school basketball is plagued with bribery and corruption. This is an easy source of money if you're a literal demigod like Peter Parker. 2nd Inventions/business/patents take incredibly long time to legalize, operate and finally turn a profit. Time that ole ben might not have. So peter made an impulse decision to join a team. The full plan isn't revealed yet but it shortly will be so you're gonna have to take my word for it. The interesting thing to note here is that I didn't say he didn't have other plans other than basketball brewing. He might be working on something else along with basketball. 3rd the obvious parallel between the original Peter Parker wrestling to make some money with this Fic's peter using his physical gifts to save his Uncle. In the first scenario it was what got his Uncle killed in the first place, here its inversed. Still none of this guarantees that he succeeds in basketball. Something might happen, who knows! 4th the obvious moral dilemma that he will have to make because his Uncle is strictly against bribes! I understand that the idea of him joining the team is flimsy but I truly believe If I was in his position I would do the same thing. Use my superpowers to quickly make as much as money as possible to save what was for all intents and purposes my 'Father'. That brings us to the conclusion to my TED Talk, thank you for reading.

BookDragonling
BookDragonlingLv4BookDragonling

I regularly run out of things to read so I'll throw this in the library and come back to it since the writing is better than most out there.

UdayWrites:But i'll defend some of my decisions #SPOILERS There are some light š¬š©šØš¢š„šžš«š¬ down. . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 1st I've stated how profitable basketball is! Even high school basketball is plagued with bribery and corruption. This is an easy source of money if you're a literal demigod like Peter Parker. 2nd Inventions/business/patents take incredibly long time to legalize, operate and finally turn a profit. Time that ole ben might not have. So peter made an impulse decision to join a team. The full plan isn't revealed yet but it shortly will be so you're gonna have to take my word for it. The interesting thing to note here is that I didn't say he didn't have other plans other than basketball brewing. He might be working on something else along with basketball. 3rd the obvious parallel between the original Peter Parker wrestling to make some money with this Fic's peter using his physical gifts to save his Uncle. In the first scenario it was what got his Uncle killed in the first place, here its inversed. Still none of this guarantees that he succeeds in basketball. Something might happen, who knows! 4th the obvious moral dilemma that he will have to make because his Uncle is strictly against bribes! I understand that the idea of him joining the team is flimsy but I truly believe If I was in his position I would do the same thing. Use my superpowers to quickly make as much as money as possible to save what was for all intents and purposes my 'Father'. That brings us to the conclusion to my TED Talk, thank you for reading.
UdayWrites
UdayWritesAuthorUdayWrites

Sure thing dude. Again thanks for taking the time to read this story and feel free to share your thoughts if you ever decide to resume reading!

BookDragonling:I regularly run out of things to read so I'll throw this in the library and come back to it since the writing is better than most out there.
Enlightened_Rookie
Enlightened_RookieLv13Enlightened_Rookie

So um you canā€™ jnvent something if you donā€™t have ideas for it big brain plus like homeboy was in millitary you donā€™t exactly have to be the smartest mf to join

God_of_hentai
God_of_hentaiLv14God_of_hentai

the only problem i have is your overpowered tag peter jsnt overpowered in ANY WAY maybe his smarts but he isnt as smart as tony and like its dumb there are characters more op then him in the story to the point he cant ever beat them i like it but jesus is he weak

UdayWrites:Sure thing dude. Again thanks for taking the time to read this story and feel free to share your thoughts if you ever decide to resume reading!
Insta_username
Insta_usernameLv2Insta_username

Dude even american college basketball students don't get any money If someone sponser them they lose chance to play in NBA There is no money in highschool and college basketball nothing nada.. LeBron james had a huge controversy when he is was in high school they were going to ban him coz allegedly he took money for some photos or something

UdayWrites:But i'll defend some of my decisions #SPOILERS There are some light š¬š©šØš¢š„šžš«š¬ down. . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 1st I've stated how profitable basketball is! Even high school basketball is plagued with bribery and corruption. This is an easy source of money if you're a literal demigod like Peter Parker. 2nd Inventions/business/patents take incredibly long time to legalize, operate and finally turn a profit. Time that ole ben might not have. So peter made an impulse decision to join a team. The full plan isn't revealed yet but it shortly will be so you're gonna have to take my word for it. The interesting thing to note here is that I didn't say he didn't have other plans other than basketball brewing. He might be working on something else along with basketball. 3rd the obvious parallel between the original Peter Parker wrestling to make some money with this Fic's peter using his physical gifts to save his Uncle. In the first scenario it was what got his Uncle killed in the first place, here its inversed. Still none of this guarantees that he succeeds in basketball. Something might happen, who knows! 4th the obvious moral dilemma that he will have to make because his Uncle is strictly against bribes! I understand that the idea of him joining the team is flimsy but I truly believe If I was in his position I would do the same thing. Use my superpowers to quickly make as much as money as possible to save what was for all intents and purposes my 'Father'. That brings us to the conclusion to my TED Talk, thank you for reading.
Nevarus
NevarusLv5Nevarus

at least someone said it. I would've tacked on that if they go to the right person like the Osborne company, for example, with something definitive, then a contract with at least a down payment is brought up and it could be done in a day vs however long the bribes would take for basketball...... author thinks it through, but not well.

Insta_username:Dude even american college basketball students don't get any money If someone sponser them they lose chance to play in NBA There is no money in highschool and college basketball nothing nada.. LeBron james had a huge controversy when he is was in high school they were going to ban him coz allegedly he took money for some photos or something