Review Detail of WhatIsANormalName in Alter Dimension: Lucky Dungeon Master

Not the worst novel i have read. I like the skill idea, that's neat but everything else is a bit meh. Writing quality could be better but has shown improvement over the chapters. Stability of updates is a quality that the novel does not shine in, a one month break is fine though as long as they keep up writing. Story development is great, i don't hate any of it i find the parallel world gimmick to be nice and overall is good. character design get a 4 because its to early to give it any lower but you may want to give your character some more personality. Also spending 73 points on luck on a test, no a quiz is infuriating and you may want to revise that as it comes of as rather wasteful to become the god of luck to ace a quiz world background great to early to give it any lower but is rather generic so 4 Some good websites to fix grammer is stuff like https://quillbot.com/grammar-check and https://chat.openai.com/auth/login just make sure to run through it to check its not being non-sensical