There's not much to say other than it's a really interesting idea let down by absolutely garbage writing. Now, when you read "garbage writing" you probably thought, "Oh it can't be *that* bad." right? Wrong. It really is that bad. Till this get's a major top-to-bottom rewrite with a qualified editor, it would be best to avoid it.
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