Review Detail of TheSystemFan in In the movie worlds with my system

Item: In the movie worlds with my system
Rating: 3.8

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TheSystemFanLv51yrTheSystemFan

So I like the premise of the story. But there are no punctuations like fullstop or comma. So it's like you are reading one continuous sentence. Also I don't know if the Author wants to improve or not but he should really consider this stuff. I mean adding a fullstop after a complete sentence is a basic requirement to be an author.

In the movie worlds with my system

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LemonZawodowiecLv5LemonZawodowiec

oh... so it's probably some MTL...

1yr

JutoLv14Juto

Most likely, but possibly it is not one. as even mtl translations tend to keep some punctuation of the original author unless there was non in the first place.

LemonZawodowiec:oh... so it's probably some MTL...

1yr

horrendous_potatoLv4horrendous_potato

I've never heard some refer to a period as a full stop before.

11mth

TheSystemFanLv5TheSystemFan

I'm from India. We use that word here.

horrendous_potato:I've never heard some refer to a period as a full stop before.

11mth

Ototsu_YumeLv10Ototsu_Yume

UK too, calling it a period is a yank thing.

TheSystemFan:I'm from India. We use that word here.

4mth