Review Detail of Para23 in ZuoMeng: To Dream

Overall the world and character building is very well done, the author managed to make me care about the MC and their family with only one chapter! And what happened to them after was equally tragic. One issue I had was the chapter length tho, it’ s a bit too long, to the point that I sometimes find myself loosing interest and skipping parts. The beginning of the first chapter was admittedly not to my taste, because I’m not personally someone who likes to read an long-ish info dump on the MCs life. That isn’t completely a bad thing tho, the author did manage to write it in a way that wasn’t too bland or stretched out like I’ve seen in so many other Webnovels. There were a few awkward sentences and paragraphs that could probably be stream lined a bit more, but other than that, this was a surprisingly interesting read because I don’t usually read this genre of books. Keep improving author! This was great!