Review Detail of Despair512 in System: Supreme NPC
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A temporary review. Will be changed to better fit the actual story later. The first few chapters so far struggle a lot with keeping the correct tense and overall grammar needs some work. The idea behind a story is most definitely there. Just not applied in the best way. Will edit after 30 Ch. or less if I don’t make it that far…
System: Supreme NPC
Maketh07
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Hi! Your review is greatly appreciated. Yes, I already decided to fix all the errors in the first twenty chapters. Soon, it will be done. I let you know in a comment once done. Anyway, please continue reading even after you reached Chapter 30. The story gets better and the way it was depicted as the chapter progress. Thank you!