Review Detail of DetachedDreamer in A Superman Found In Marvel.

There is a good story in here but its clouded with consistent grammar mistakes. Also, he wished to be an elite superman not Clark. the Void rips a version of Clark from another universe to create a generic version of clarks origin, I find this absurdly stupid. The void could of took his parents with him but wanted to force this 2nd hand copy of the original on us. not the MC himself but his beginnings on earth. a little creativity and you could of done something original and still have been a superman. im going to keep reading though because for all my criticism I still see potential in the story and will delete this review for a better one if the story does reach the potential I hope.