Review Detail of LordSputnik in A Bet with Slutty Evil Being!

Being a little generous since this seems to be the first non-fan-fiction by the author. The Good: I like that it doesn't try to be anything more than it is, just a pure male-driven smut story. The cover is also a nice choice. The bad: Short chapters means short sex scenes. Asking for stuff at the end of every chapter is a huge turn-off too. (Especially annoying if you use the audiobook function.) The sex scenes themselves aren't bad, but they lack imagery to draw you in and make you feel like you can see it. This would also be solved with longer chapters. The Neutral: Keep it up, by straying away from fan-fic you can finally build your own complete cast of characters. Most of us have a certain trope we like and there is nothing wrong with using tropes. If you do use tropes, just give them enough substance to stand up without a crutch.