Review Detail of KK9494 in Harry Potter : Wizard SI

Item: Harry Potter : Wizard SI
Rating: 5

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KK9494Author8mthKK9494

I am trying my best here. Please read and give positive comments and reviews as I cant take harassment . If you dont like the fanfic , You can read others

Harry Potter : Wizard SI

KK9494

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AHighLevelLifeformLv13AHighLevelLifeform

HP: Eagle Soars by SHEOGORATH

Sami_Alfoheday:Which novel do you mean?

8mth

Hardik_Yadav_4121Lv4Hardik_Yadav_4121

Can we give postive critisism?

8mth

KK9494AuthorKK9494

yes

Hardik_Yadav_4121:Can we give postive critisism?

8mth

Ghost_FlareLv4Ghost_Flare

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TranshumanistLv14Transhumanist

It would be positively wonderful if you could proofread your chapters before posting. Getting a beta reader would be a positive change in your story too. Currently your story looks like it was doodled on the empty spaces on a textbook by a sleepy Indian teenager while he was trying to ignore his teacher on the first class of Monday.

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KK9494AuthorKK9494

🙈 you found my secret. ☺️

Transhumanist:It would be positively wonderful if you could proofread your chapters before posting. Getting a beta reader would be a positive change in your story too. Currently your story looks like it was doodled on the empty spaces on a textbook by a sleepy Indian teenager while he was trying to ignore his teacher on the first class of Monday.

8mth

AHighLevelLifeformLv13AHighLevelLifeform

Come on!! At least change the paragraphs. You’re laterally past and copy from a certain legendary fanfic Not that i don’t like your idea! Its good but you can make it better way more better

8mth

Sami_AlfohedayLv13Sami_Alfoheday

Which novel do you mean?

AHighLevelLifeform:Come on!! At least change the paragraphs. You’re laterally past and copy from a certain legendary fanfic Not that i don’t like your idea! Its good but you can make it better way more better

8mth