Review Detail of KK9494 in Harry Potter : Wizard SI

Item: Harry Potter : Wizard SI
Rating: 5

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KK9494Author8mthKK9494

I am trying my best here. Please read and give positive comments and reviews as I cant take harassment . If you dont like the fanfic , You can read others

Harry Potter : Wizard SI

KK9494

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AHighLevelLifeformLv13AHighLevelLifeform

Come on!! At least change the paragraphs. You’re laterally past and copy from a certain legendary fanfic Not that i don’t like your idea! Its good but you can make it better way more better

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Hardik_Yadav_4121Lv4Hardik_Yadav_4121

Can we give postive critisism?

8mth

KK9494AuthorKK9494

yes

Hardik_Yadav_4121:Can we give postive critisism?

8mth

Ghost_FlareLv4Ghost_Flare

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TranshumanistLv14Transhumanist

It would be positively wonderful if you could proofread your chapters before posting. Getting a beta reader would be a positive change in your story too. Currently your story looks like it was doodled on the empty spaces on a textbook by a sleepy Indian teenager while he was trying to ignore his teacher on the first class of Monday.

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KK9494AuthorKK9494

🙈 you found my secret. ☺️

Transhumanist:It would be positively wonderful if you could proofread your chapters before posting. Getting a beta reader would be a positive change in your story too. Currently your story looks like it was doodled on the empty spaces on a textbook by a sleepy Indian teenager while he was trying to ignore his teacher on the first class of Monday.

8mth

Sami_AlfohedayLv13Sami_Alfoheday

Which novel do you mean?

AHighLevelLifeform:Come on!! At least change the paragraphs. You’re laterally past and copy from a certain legendary fanfic Not that i don’t like your idea! Its good but you can make it better way more better

8mth

AHighLevelLifeformLv13AHighLevelLifeform

HP: Eagle Soars by SHEOGORATH

Sami_Alfoheday:Which novel do you mean?

8mth