Review Detail of forgettableBuddha in Rise of the Blood Sovereign

Excellent! The first chapters blew my mind! A fluid and worth-reading story! A new emerging jewel, I might add! I usually tend to review solely to encourage and help promising authors. But this time is different! This story is just so outstanding! *For Author: I also tried your other novel…However, there’s too much ‘easy’ information given early on, nearly like you’re telling me directly the story's secrets at the beginning. This is really a significant drawback, at least for me— it is almost like you’ve spoiled me early on and purposefully lowered my fun and, thus, the possible mysteriously and curiosity. Curiosity is a strong emotion; try playing with it. While too much mystery can get frustrating, too little becomes less exciting. This novel is also mildly affected by the latter— For example: the father’s loving part is explained too early— too much, and I feel too little, especially when I have yet to understand the character and to get engaged with him. Or just the too many details of the Two possible antagonists. That being said, the story is very smooth and immersive! I love it! So this is just a note for the author to make a study to see if others feel the same and maybe improve. (Also, I think you should stop using both meters and feet simultaneously— it ‘wakes’ me up from this wonderful story for no reason. One of them is more than enough to visualize the scene.)