TheReign
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Well I started counting differently. The First one they entered is not counted, since it is the one they docked and is safe, only from then on are they counted
From what I remember, it's a sci-fi where the military manages to get in contact with aliens, a race that is about to be destroyed, and they decide to come here and see if they wanna conquer us or not.
ah, should have been apprehensive or freeze for an instant. Hmm, freeze would be the better one
A lie ofc, hahahahaha
Yes, just shortening it
Well, it's kinda more the emperor who is following the god, the rest of the family just got involved shallowly, just to gain some more power and that's it
Yes, it was a spear of light, that would be a typo, sorry bout that
yes, that is a mistake, will be fixed
There is a reason for that, you will see soon, Lyle could have evolved earlier and reached the Grand Knight realm, there is a reason why he doesn't do so
That was supposed to be more a figure of speech tbh, I just didn't word it that well I believe
Not hundreds, the rebels have like 10 of them, as for the imperial forces, you have to remember the scope of the empire and the millions of people present there, it isn't that weird for an empire to have over a hundred Titled Knights, which is still very low when compared to how many people they have in total
a random skill improvement, which means one skill will be chosen randomly and improved
That was before, now the total number is lower for all as there are more Lt. Colonels and less soldiers thanks to the battles
from below, it entered the stomach from an angle from below, going up to the heart
That would be a mistake then as they are Silver Knights, I probably added one more I without even noticing it, will check back to fix it
Well, he won't be able to coat it or use it by itself, but he will be able to withstand the light and there is a part of an arc where he uses the light as well
yeah, that part of the sentence do be weird, I agree, will change
technically yes, but not quite
I will only give a slight spoiler and tell you one already has evolved further
Yeah, there was a point in time I was writing multiple chaps a day for each of my novels, including the one I stipped writing which is free, and because of that, didn't have time to edit as much. Also, I will go and edit some of the mistakes you pointed out, but not all because once you do change a paragraph, all the comments on it are gone. i honestly prefer to have the comments there because as a reader myself, I do like to see what people's thoughts were qhen reading a novel on this app