Review Detail of Allazar in My Undeath
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First off, let me start by saying the author is a great writer and very arti culate. The world building is very good and the character design and advancement is very thought out. However, I feel the title is kinda misleading, I’ currently almost caught up in chapters and I can honestly say the tone of the story changes from being a very intriguing and interesting character plot, to just turning into a thousand other adventure plot lines. All-in-all the start I enjoyed, but I feel like the direction change is just not for me. I hope you enjoy the novel, just not the direction I wanted from the character👍
My Undeath
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Yeah, when I was originally writing this novel on the platform, the original goal was to have approximately 100 chapters and the story was going to be more focused on what you'd expect from a novel with this title. If you keep an eye out, I plan to write a side story to this novel. One where the MC takes a different path. An alternate timeline of sorts. I'm glad you've still enjoyed it, though. Thank you.My next novel, releasing around February, is a novel that is planned out and will have almost a year of research, brain storming, planning, and design crammed into it. I hope you'll read another of my novels one day ✨