Review Detail of Jmitch1 in My Undeath
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The thing this novel suffers most is it’s: (1) lack of identity and (2) lack of direction. It first starts out as him being undead, but then the novel turns complete to him being a human being in a tradition adventure/dungeon story? There are no real stakes. The fact that classes are restricting a person from using items? And then I’m like, okay, he’s human now…. What’s next? The author fails to tell us. I just feel bored. And it started out interesting… but more and more I am losing interest.
My Undeath
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I'm sorry I couldn't keep you interested. I might have tried to push the story out too fast, and between university and work, I haven't been planning out the novel as well as I should. If the quality is lacking because of that, then all I can do is try to be better in the future. Thanks for sticking around with it as long as you did, though!