Review Detail of Jhaydun in My Undeath

Bro can you please teach me. I want to improve my books . You can also give me an advice

Teaching someone how to write better is a long process, and I wouldn't be able to do all of that through this app. I suggest you take as many online writing courses for fiction that you can. There are many cheap and free courses available for people all over the world. Good luck!

Not shameless if you deserve the 5 star review.

Hello wanted to ask if you could plan romance in your story

At the moment, there's a little romance brewing.

what path does he take like a warrior or mage or ruge or necromancer or a mix ethereal this os going to be a great book

I'll just say that he doesn't take a singularly defined path. I don't want to spoil anything.

Harem or 1fml? Hope it’s 1 fml

Definitely 1. There are a couple of moments where other characters are briefly interested in him, but it doesn't go anywhere, for one reason or another. And the main focus still isn't romance, as Gerard does travel around without his romantic partner for many chapters at a time.

I wonder if sprite gets a human body? Or at least one that isn’t a golem. And I wonder if it’s her. Has the romance even start yet

I won't spoil anything for you.

Hope it’s her. Only if she does get a full human body or one that can evolve. Since tbh she’ll probably be the one who will be with him the most.