Hey, it's Jhaydun here! Just shamelessly reviewing my novel. I do love this story, and understand it's not for everyone. Please let me know what mistakes I make and how I could improve my story, because I will take everyone's suggestions into consideration. Thank you for the lovely support I've received so far. Gerard and I both appreciate it! ✨✨
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LIKETeaching someone how to write better is a long process, and I wouldn't be able to do all of that through this app. I suggest you take as many online writing courses for fiction that you can. There are many cheap and free courses available for people all over the world. Good luck!
Bharati_Singha_7905:Bro can you please teach me. I want to improve my books . You can also give me an advice
Jhaydun:Teaching someone how to write better is a long process, and I wouldn't be able to do all of that through this app. I suggest you take as many online writing courses for fiction that you can. There are many cheap and free courses available for people all over the world. Good luck!
Jhaydun:Teaching someone how to write better is a long process, and I wouldn't be able to do all of that through this app. I suggest you take as many online writing courses for fiction that you can. There are many cheap and free courses available for people all over the world. Good luck!
Qwe_Qwer_2692:what path does he take like a warrior or mage or ruge or necromancer or a mix ethereal this os going to be a great book
Definitely 1. There are a couple of moments where other characters are briefly interested in him, but it doesn't go anywhere, for one reason or another. And the main focus still isn't romance, as Gerard does travel around without his romantic partner for many chapters at a time.
DefyingDemon:Harem or 1fml? Hope it’s 1 fml
I wonder if sprite gets a human body? Or at least one that isn’t a golem. And I wonder if it’s her. Has the romance even start yet
Jhaydun:Definitely 1. There are a couple of moments where other characters are briefly interested in him, but it doesn't go anywhere, for one reason or another. And the main focus still isn't romance, as Gerard does travel around without his romantic partner for many chapters at a time.
DefyingDemon:I wonder if sprite gets a human body? Or at least one that isn’t a golem. And I wonder if it’s her. Has the romance even start yet