Review Detail of Demons_and_I in My Undeath
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Overall, this book has a lot of potential. There are a lot of errors grammatically and punctuation wise in the first chapter, but it gets better. The story feels to rigid, and there isn't a lot of outside the box thinking It is pretty decent as the character development becomes better along the way, but the beginning just feels empty and lacking of necessary information. Decent but there is a lot of work to be done for further improvement ...
My Undeath
Jhaydun
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A lot of errors, you say? With the innumerable mistakes in your novel, I'm not sure you'd know an error if you saw one. I feel like you've rated me a little harshly because I was honest about your story. Sure, there might not be some super unique twist initially, but that doesn't deserve a bad review. Please let me know what I can do to make this better.
This isn't a bad review. It's a honest one. I'll never do something petty like that. Although I went through my book looking for the grammatical mistakes you talked about, I couldn't find any. But that wouldn't make me lie or be excessively harsh. I just wrote what I thought. Your book is decent, but I assure you that you can do better. If you look at your early chapters carefully, you'll understand what I'm talking about.
Jhaydun:A lot of errors, you say? With the innumerable mistakes in your novel, I'm not sure you'd know an error if you saw one. I feel like you've rated me a little harshly because I was honest about your story. Sure, there might not be some super unique twist initially, but that doesn't deserve a bad review. Please let me know what I can do to make this better.
Also, since I couldn't find the errors you talked about would you mind pointing them out for me while I do the same for you? So that you know I mean well...
Jhaydun:A lot of errors, you say? With the innumerable mistakes in your novel, I'm not sure you'd know an error if you saw one. I feel like you've rated me a little harshly because I was honest about your story. Sure, there might not be some super unique twist initially, but that doesn't deserve a bad review. Please let me know what I can do to make this better.
Sorry for getting defensive there. If you were honest with your review, then it's all good with me. I don't know what it takes to be an editor for someone's novel on here, but I would be more than happy to help you out with those errors if I figure out how.
Demons_and_I:This isn't a bad review. It's a honest one. I'll never do something petty like that. Although I went through my book looking for the grammatical mistakes you talked about, I couldn't find any. But that wouldn't make me lie or be excessively harsh. I just wrote what I thought. Your book is decent, but I assure you that you can do better. If you look at your early chapters carefully, you'll understand what I'm talking about.
Demons_and_I:Also, since I couldn't find the errors you talked about would you mind pointing them out for me while I do the same for you? So that you know I mean well...
No worries bro, it's all good 😉👍 Just leave a paragraph comment on the part you think has an error. I'm gonna go do the same for you right now. I really do like you book. It's one of the best new books I've seen so far, apart from mine of course 😁👍
Jhaydun:Sorry for getting defensive there. If you were honest with your review, then it's all good with me. I don't know what it takes to be an editor for someone's novel on here, but I would be more than happy to help you out with those errors if I figure out how.
Sorry for stopping half way. It's a long chapter, and I've got to have dinner and go to bed. I honestly wish I could edit it directly for you, because that would be so much quicker and easier 😅
Demons_and_I:No worries bro, it's all good 😉👍 Just leave a paragraph comment on the part you think has an error. I'm gonna go do the same for you right now. I really do like you book. It's one of the best new books I've seen so far, apart from mine of course 😁👍