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Vennom
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Going through the reviews section of this book to decide on reading it or not ๐Ÿ˜ I hope this would be of a help: One little flaw I found, at the initial chapters, is the constant use of the alphabet A in naming the characters to the extent that remembering the knight's name, Aramis's father, is a little bit difficult even at this moment ๐Ÿ˜ถ But maybe, just maybe, it is only me who finds it as a flaw ๐Ÿ˜ I enjoyed the switch of time between Aurnia's past and her present without affecting the story's flow ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿฝ But I hated one thing, how Aurnia had been crying coz it is really heart breaking to me ๐Ÿ˜„ Author, why must she suffer a lot ๐Ÿ™ƒ If you are a person with heart diseases, then you should maybe not read the first chapters ๐Ÿ˜… It is just a personal advice ๐Ÿ˜„ Reading it made my stone heart emotional ๐Ÿคญ Something nice ๐Ÿค Characters' actions are given more consideration over theories, but I like it ๐Ÿ˜Œ Although reading actions of characters makes a HD vision in the memory, theories should also be given a home, Missy Castillo. Five sense organs stimulation is as well good. I'm not sure of the author wanting a spoiler revelation, so nothing will be said pertaining the story. Galatea: The Last Whisperer has said it all if you have read it. The journey will be worth it for sure, I am sure. Give it a try. May the story not be dropped.

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Every Tear, A Waterfall

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Missy_Castillo
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Thank you for the honest feedback ๐Ÿค— Spoilers and revelations are too early to be laid out as I wanted to focus on Aurnia and Aramis' blooming relationship for now, before the story would turn heavy ๐Ÿคญ For the names, oh dear Lord, I don't what has gotten into me for naming the two fathers with Andruche and Anderewe, sorry readers, I couldn't change this. I am glad that your heart ached for our female lead because that was really my goal and I intend for her to be very vulnerable and miserable in the first two chapters ๐Ÿ˜ Lastly, thank you for bringing up my other book and for appreciating my spoilers and cliff-hangers there, you sounded like you have a lot of theory going inside your head regarding Gala's story mwehehehe. I appreciate your review so much! ๐Ÿค—โค