Review Detail of bluerabyss in Hellbound With The Cold Alpha

Hi there lovely! I'm not usually into romance novels but the synopsis of your book is great and eye-catching, it can definitely grab the attention of readers. While reading, I noticed that there are some words that were misused in the paragraphs. And honetly, I was a bit confused, maybe because I find your sentences to be sounding a bit weird? Especially when I was reading them out loud. But, that can be fixed though so it's not much. Aside from that, your story has great potential and I really hope that the FL will come out strong in your story. 😊😊😊 Well that's all, keep writing! Fighting dear Author.