Review Detail of Drew_Paroz in My Five Beautiful Girlfriends Against the Spirit World

Overall, I did not like the book as the FML(?) is a sadistic manipulator of the ML. I came here from the author's other book which I really enjoy [go read that], but I cannot handle this new one. The author is all over chapter comments defending the the FML, but if every chapter you need to rush to the defense of a character saying "you will get it if you read a bunch more chapters" it really does not sell this novel well. Good: 1) Consistent updates and engaged creator 2) No grammar errors and good prose makes it easy to understand the setting Bad: 1) ML allows himself to be jerked around by an awful FML 2) FML enjoying ML's suffering 3) how frequent the author mentions breasts in a roundabout way like twin peaks doing X or her curves just existing 4) this is a personal preference, but the book appears to me to a highly keep reading and it will make more sense one versus things add up as you go which is again a perfectly acceptable genre/type, just not for me 5) [being unfair] distracts from author's other book which I really enjoy