Review Detail of DaasWolfe in Hong Kong Billionaire

iam 25 chapter now in the novel. its getting better and better. lot of people are having a good opinion on it. also i have significantly improved my writing level, so i decide to go back and improve the quality of the the first 10 chapters. after reading lot of reviews, which i am extremely grateful to. i noticed most people think the story is a bit rushed and they are right. i will try to improve on this aspect if their is any aspect you think i should improve on. i hope you can notify me. thank you all and i wish my novel can make you happy.[img=recommend]