Review Detail of Zhoa_Fei in Hong Kong Billionaire

I can support my fellow transmigration authors, so I will offer you this some advice. Some of the dialogue that I saw could use some brushing up and editing to better aid in the process of reading. While I am a huge fan of Fang Ming, I believe that the story is coming off as a big rush I suggest slowing down the pace just a tad bit to allow us to digest the actions of each chapter a bit better. Work on the differentiating the dialogue and the speakers' personalities. That would help. Other than that, world building could be utilized a bit more in the future. Keep up the solid story. I was hooked since the very first chapter, which is a good thing.