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Review Detail of danty in Naruto: Never Die Twice

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Theres not much subtlety in the writing. Mc is kind of a sociopath, feels awfully flat at times, but the characters do feel internally consistent with their background. Pacing is good so far, but story feels like a reading a speed run to the endgame level cap. Good thing the author left out systems , ROB , and non cannon crossovers.

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Naruto: Never Die Twice

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Fair enough.

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Hopefully I improve in this regard.