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Outlier1yrCommentedI sense powerscaling inconsistencies
The fight finished with Sasuke ending it with his windmill triple attack technique. Upon unleashing the dragon flame jutsu, its power had magnified far more than it had in the animated series. Orochimaru thought he was going to die if he did not raise his defenses. By the time Sasuke finished, he was out of chakra.- Outlier1yrCommented
Wow, how do you get dialogue to flow so smooth like this g. I wish I could do this
"Then how can we trust what mere Genin are saying?" Anko asked. - Outlier1yrReplied to AkitoTakahashi
my eyes must be seeing things lol. I looked back and wondered "what semi colon." pfft. sorry to waste your time my g.
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Lee kiyoung was just a Machiavellian person. although, he still held attachments and other things.
Explanation… there was none of the sorts; I was just a man who was using his girlfriend for money – her dad was rich and she was an easy target. - Outlier1yrCommented
was the ; a mistake?
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this is a speculation. unique jutsu are something which he cannot learn just by seeing... its not physically possible unless he derives it from something?
[Water Release: Windmill Shuriken] - Outlier1yrReplied to THOTSLAYER
thing is he don't have the jutsu proficiency. when he does later down the line, he can just use jutsu books anyway my g. I don't see the efficiency, maybe I'm just not as clever as u but I dont see it thh
[Water Release: Windmill Shuriken] - Outlier1yrReplied to THOTSLAYER
hmm my Ur onto something but Ur not at the same time. he needs a lot of time to do this .constant revision. its not the sharingan where he can just remember
[Water Release: Windmill Shuriken] - Outlier1yrReplied to THOTSLAYER
whats the point tho. he has no jutsu profiency
[Water Release: Windmill Shuriken] - Outlier1yrReplied to THOTSLAYER
how?
[Water Release: Windmill Shuriken] - Outlier1yrReplied to antmanFN
also powerstones matter. im not getting enough to be putting out 2 chaps.
Better, worse or same. - Outlier1yrReplied to
..... chaps will be longer don't worry. also 1 chap imo is enough. it keeps my stability in regard to writing and my stockpile.
Better, worse or same. - Outlier1yrReplied to Kermit_the_Frog
thanks sir.
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'Yes.'
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'I don't want that.'
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but he's a kid. can't really tell if a kids really yk
As soon as he said this, a fair skin kid with black hair and brown eyes briskly walked down the stairs. His attire was different to the time before – now wearing: black cargo shorts with a black t-shirt. A holster carrying kunai and another one with shuriken strapped around with bandages. Above his ankles were also bandages wrapped around – seemingly hiding more weapons. - Outlier1yrReplied to AngelFromSpace
if she is really a female that is... hehe
To be honest, I don't use the ability at all. That's for two reasons: one, I don't actually know how; two, the amount of KBG informants in Moscow is ridiculous. Those fuckers snitch on anything they think the KGB would be interested in, and someone who looks like he's dabbling in witchcraft or something would definitely qualify. - Outlier1yrReplied to whitedevil
yes u are
A/N: Shittt I forgot to update... to busy watching the world cup ffs... sorry, anyways, enjoy the chap. - Outlier1yrReplied to AngelFromSpace
Okay, so I asked a simple question but you decided to say "I think a lot of authors do etc." Why?... Just answer my question g. Also the semi-colon in the phara was incorrect. Dem ting dere was connected at the wrong time. Also brudda, nice talking to you. You seem like a decent person, outside all this personal bias you have to this women. You one of her simps? I understand now. Anyway I will pray for you to find your way and get out of that infatuation you have with her.
To be honest, I don't use the ability at all. That's for two reasons: one, I don't actually know how; two, the amount of KBG informants in Moscow is ridiculous. Those fuckers snitch on anything they think the KGB would be interested in, and someone who looks like he's dabbling in witchcraft or something would definitely qualify. - Outlier1yrReplied to AngelFromSpace
Okay, so you want me to speak properly. First my g... I wasn't complaining; I was simply stating a fact. The author overuses semi-colons. Tell me, is this is true or not? Second, your point is valid about using semi-colons in a list, however... this wasn't what I was talking about g. Third, I get a bunch of notifications in bulk to comments on my fic(replies) so I sincerely apologize to the author if I have missed it. Overall, anyway just my main point was: author uses semi-colons unnecessarily. that's it. Your just taking things out of context g.
To be honest, I don't use the ability at all. That's for two reasons: one, I don't actually know how; two, the amount of KBG informants in Moscow is ridiculous. Those fuckers snitch on anything they think the KGB would be interested in, and someone who looks like he's dabbling in witchcraft or something would definitely qualify.