Very good story, very good ideas and with a good world background. But I'm going to have to stop reading this novel since it seems very slow and I'm a little bored that the story doesn't progress. There are many chapters for the same topic, which makes it long and boring. But all in all I liked the story and it is a good start for an author with little experience.[img=recommend]
PilgrimJagger
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