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AkashicLibrary
AkashicLibraryLv11yrAkashicLibrary

Bland mc. Grammar isn’t that good. No spelling mistakes so far. The way author writes seems very bland and the way he describes things seems like a child. Ex: “guess what?” Author has a good idea but it isn't executed properly.

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Anime mashup with omnipotent system

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Only_omnipotent
Only_omnipotentAuthorOnly_omnipotent

Well... That actually because I am a child right now. I am just 13 this year.

ISuckAtNaming
ISuckAtNamingLv13ISuckAtNaming

you are so young bro.... you have alot of potential. keep the good work

Only_omnipotent:Well... That actually because I am a child right now. I am just 13 this year.
One2Turtle
One2TurtleLv13One2Turtle

Are you honest?

ISuckAtNaming:you are so young bro.... you have alot of potential. keep the good work
Himank_Gosain
Himank_GosainLv4Himank_Gosain

Bro don’t let mommy and daddy read it!!

Only_omnipotent:Well... That actually because I am a child right now. I am just 13 this year.
GoldEmperor
GoldEmperorLv3GoldEmperor

My condolences. to think a you would fall into this rabbithole at such age

Only_omnipotent:Well... That actually because I am a child right now. I am just 13 this year.