Bro can lift 74 pounds

It is definitely good with no grammar mistakes but its not really my cup of tea. I like baam with a single fm instead of harem as it makes the relationship seem more precious

Fr they changed zoros name to sauron

They only eat some like magikarp and slowpoke tail

A lot of potential but writing seems a bit bland. Its okay. I dont know if ill continue though because of the harem thing author said he is gonna do.

Bro what 💀

I reread all the chapters and now i understand. You added a bit to many details and repeated some but in different words. Such as in chapter 18 in the line about the handcuffs. You didnt need to add that he was calm internally while thinking internally. That was why. I guess im being picky rn though

Its pretty good hut the something about the way the author writes seem off. The quality is good and there are barely any grammar mistakes and even if there is one its very hard to notice.

This is getting ridiculous. What happened to him? Any hackers able to find if hes dead or smt

Beautifully done. The personalities of God and the archangels are pretty much perfect. I can see why they made the choices they did but im pretty sure michael wouldnt harm the oracle because the other gods can see the future too but not like apollo because then he would need to harm all the gods. Barely any grammar mistakes. Although short quality is up there with the s tier novels.

Technically drinking alcohol isnt really a sin. They say the things that make you further from God is a sin. If your drunk it can easily affect your mindset.

Isnt yeshua korean? I feel like God using jesus instead of yeshua is better personally.

You need to base your reviews on quality not your own opinion

Is it just or or have i felt like i read this before bc i swear i read a fanfic with the same plot as this one. Or im just trippin. Exp exp exp ….. …. …

Tbf koreans know blacks commit 60% of crimes so they are careful and sometimes scared of them. People think statistics are racist btw

This is what reviews are supposed to be though?

Didnt one of hercules close ones died from the hydra poison? Did you use that as a base

A bit of a warning to the readers. Jin woos personality changes a bit later in the story for the plot. Its the plot that makes grayfia stronger btw.

Shit grammar but the story make sup for it. Its a pretty good fanfic if you ignore the chinese like writing. If the author improves on writing its a 4.3 star

Average chinese fanfic. If you cant handle this then good luck mate, although i wont read this