Review Detail of RedAbigor in The Dragon of Akiyame

I like the concept and idea of the story, but it is almost impossible to read. Punctuation is a mess. Events and interactions are a mess. There are tons of references to characters that were never introduced. Well, at least it helps to ignore the forced logic behind MC's actions. The way the author tells the story gives you cringe vibes; it's like reading the thoughts of a teenager, who gets easily distracted by literally anything while never having a meaningful or coherent line of thought. A novel could become two times better if only the author used some Microsoft Word software to check for obvious mistakes.